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    (Webcomic) Final Fantasy IV-Ever

    This is my sprite webcomic that I have been working on:

    http://www.drunkduck.com/Final_Fanta...x.php?p=716811


    It is a spoof of how ridiculous Final Fantasy IV The After Years gets.

    Tell me what you guys think.
    No Sir, I punched the viceroy in the stomach, then I headbutted him in the face. Sir.-Hal Jordan

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    Seems like a solid concept. I would definitely take the time to make your own sprites for closeups of a character. The first comic with them walking around was blurry and difficult to tell what was going on.

    As far as the writing goes, it isn't bad. So far though, I don't think the jokes have been that funny, which is something I recommend you work on.
    MEH

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    • #3
      ... yeah... I don't get it... and I'm a die hard FF fan.

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      • #4
        it'll get funnier I think well if you ever play Final Fantasy IV the After Years things make more sense

        Also a lot of sprites and stuff I had to enlarge and take from a youtube video but I'll start making things my own soon.

        Also Golbez in FF4 The After Years wears a kilt in it.
        No Sir, I punched the viceroy in the stomach, then I headbutted him in the face. Sir.-Hal Jordan

        Villain Draft (Best Team Winner)/Proud Supporter of the DCnU

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        • #5
          So what if he wears a kilt?

          Do you have a problem with the kilt?

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          • #6
            Nope no problem with it, but I did change it again to make it sound a bit more comedic and explain it so tell me what you think.
            No Sir, I punched the viceroy in the stomach, then I headbutted him in the face. Sir.-Hal Jordan

            Villain Draft (Best Team Winner)/Proud Supporter of the DCnU

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              • #8
                Um is the Kefka sprite a good thing or bad thing? lol
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                Last edited by GreenLantern888; 06-29-2010, 11:51 AM.
                No Sir, I punched the viceroy in the stomach, then I headbutted him in the face. Sir.-Hal Jordan

                Villain Draft (Best Team Winner)/Proud Supporter of the DCnU

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                • #9
                  How dare you make fun of FF IV-2.

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by Andrew NDB View Post
                    How dare you make fun of FF IV-2.
                    I actually love FFIV and FFIV-2 I am actually more making fun of Sephiroth and using this as my own way to write the characters lol not making fun of it.
                    No Sir, I punched the viceroy in the stomach, then I headbutted him in the face. Sir.-Hal Jordan

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                    • #11
                      A good thing.

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