Originally posted by Spy Smasher
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All I'm saying is that you have to do more to try to grab readers going in, and not insist that they stick with you (an unknown writer) and just trust that stories WILL get more interesting, or that horrible stuff that you started with out of the gate will somehow get mitigated or undone. As an unknown writer, you haven't done anything to merit that level of trust, and your initial treatement of the character of Corrigan in fact works to convince fans of that character NOT to trust you.
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